baseball player screaming
Link: By:JimDavis Caption:Boston Red Sox outfielder Gabe Kapler screams in disgust with himself after being picked off first base to end the fourth inningCritique:This is a good photo showing that a baseball player is angey for not winning a game. but the thing that i like about it is that it shows his expreshion on what he thinks about the game or his team but he was mad about somthing. Posted By:jessica rios
posted by connolly @ 12:22 PM
6 Comments:
a. Yes, the headline is descriptive of the contents.
b. the link does take me to the photo.
c. Yes, it includes the credit info.
d. It includes caption.
e. Its an ok critique.
e1.Yes, it comments on the general message.
e2. No.
e3. No.
e4. It mentions only that the expression on the guys face was good.
e5. Yes it identifies the CVI.
Comment By: Maria Henderson
a.Yes, the headline tells what mainly is going on.
b.Yes
c.Yes
d.Yes,it includes a caption
e.In a way it does.
e2.NO.
e3.No.
e4.The intensity in the man face,his expression,and why he was upset.
e5.Yes.
a.Yes, the headline tells what mainly is going on.
b.Yes
c.Yes
d.Yes,it includes a caption
e.In a way it does.
e2.NO.
e3.No.
e4.The intensity in the man face,his expression,and why he was upset.
Comment by:Jamie Martinez
e5.Yes.
the headline shows what the picture is about
the link leads straight to the photo
it does include a caption and photo credit info
it conveys the general messae and that is about it
The headline shows what the pictures about
The links leads right to the picture.
It includes a caption and credits who took the picture
The critique could have been better but pretty good overall.
Good job, but the critique needs more detail. Discuss the composition, focus, exposure etc.
You really should have mentioned the black background.
Grade- 90
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