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Subject: A baby reaching the other side.
photo 18
By:
Carol
Guzy
Guzy
Caption:
Kosovo
1999
The Washington Post
1999
The Washington Post
Crtique:
This photo caught my attention because it shows a sense of exscape and freedom at the same time.This photo was shot in long depth of feild. The photographer captures the hills, moutains and sky on the opposite side of the picked fence where the people is trying to help the baby to that side. That is where I get the sense of freedom.The side where the baby is leaving shows no sense of freedom.
Posted by:
Maisha Jones
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posted by connolly @ 8:54 PM
6 Comments:
Yes, the headlone of the post is descriptive of the contents.
Yes, the link does take us directly to the photo.
Yes, it includes the photo credit info.
It doesn't really include a caption.
not done yet
by maisha jones and moska noor
The headline isn't totally understood when the photo is viewed but it is okay. No the link does not take you to the exact photo but with some information provide (i.e. photographer) you can find the photo. There is a name of who took the picture along with a cation. The critique is well written and understood along the name of who posted this info.
i: not it says "blog"
ii: no the link takes me to a main page but the critique gives me an idea on what the photo looks like
iii: yes
iv: no
1: yes
2: no
3: yes
4: no
5: no
vi: yes
I like the way you descripted the photo so that we can look for it. That picture is one of my favorites.
-Rene Rodriguez
I like the way you descripted the photo so that we can look for it. That picture is one of my favorites.
-Rene Rodriguez
The headine should be the subject of the photo.
Good job on the critique. You should have mentioned something about the composition. You weren't here when we discussed much of this. I will get you some information. Also, watch your spelling.
Grade - 90
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