Akins Photojournalism

Sunday, March 20, 2005

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Link:
http://images3.deviantart.com/i/2004/104/e/b/Barren.jpg

By: Johanna K. Robinson

Critique:
I really like the simplicity of this photo, especially
the colors. The CVI is in perfect focus and the
background isn't so kind of emphasizes it even more
and not only captures your eye because of the thirds
line placement, but because of the shallow depth of
field.

Posted by Helen Lopez



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2 Comments:

At 11:28 AM, Blogger connolly said...

There should be a title for this post.

Also - BE specific!

Don't say you "like the colors" unless you are discussing what the colors are and why you like them. Identify the CVI (bald head) if you are discussing it. Mention which thirds (right)the CVI is on.

Good, but you can do better.

 
At 8:26 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your critique is pretty good but you didnt put a title.

Natalie Polm

 

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