Mia walking home.
Subject: Mia walking home.
By: David Hoegsholt
Caption: Mia walking home through the small recreational areas seperating the buildings after visiting her pusher.
Critique: This pictue has a long depth of field. All of the picture is in focus. Mia (the CVI) looks small and insignificant. It makes her seem like she's just a small person in a huge world. The tree helps set a type of frame to trap Mia in. Also she is not centered so the Rule of Thirds comes into play. She is a little passed the center mark.
by Miguel Z.
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posted by connolly @ 11:11 AM
5 Comments:
i. Yes, the head line describes what is happening in the photo.
ii. Yes, the link goes directly to the photo.
iii. Yes, this picture includes credit information.
iv. Yes, there is a caption.
v. The critique does comment on the general message of the photo, but the light is not mentioned. The exposure close up is dark. What I mean is the tree and something next to the tree are dark. Mia herself is somewhat dark. Yes, the critique mentions the focus. For the composition since the picture is taken form a distance Mia does not fill the frame. The photo is candid and you can't tell of the emotion because of the distance of the picture. The CVI is identified.
yeah there is a long depth of field on this shot.
The tree does make a frame around here which makes her small.
I like this shot because like miguel said "It like she is small on a big world"
The hedline is understood and clarified when the photo is viewed. The link takes you straight to the photo with a name of the photographer in which is also posted. There is a caption and the critique could have taken a little more time spent but it gives you brief and general information. There is a name of who it is posted by.
i: yes
ii: yes
iii: yes
iv: yes
1: yes
2: no
3: yes
4: yes
5: yes
vi: yes
Very well done. You clearly understand photography and are good at following directions.
Grade- 100
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